Bubbling

The spring bubbling Up cool water refresher Of soul and spirit

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/27/2009 6:10:00 PM

nice, hope you have a good night

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/26/2009 4:09:00 PM

I wrote a new poem Called Life is to short.check it out and tell me what you think.

Jason Rhyder

Date: 11/26/2009 12:01:00 PM

ah, nice tall order of refreshing haiku keep it up ;) and thank you for the comment -Jason

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/26/2009 9:28:00 AM

...Living Water. ...Nice Haiku ,Sara.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/26/2009 6:05:00 AM

Beautiful, refreshing Haiku, dear Sara. Back home there is a resort with healing, natural springs and they say that the Roman soldiers used to go there to heal their wounds of war. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda