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Bruised Ego

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Bruised Ego

I lusted after Deborah from my first day at school.                 
As did every other boy, her looks made them all drool.
On Valentines I sent a card despite my inhibition.
She responded with a churlish smile that set me on a mission,
I asked her for a date and she replied “well, that depends…
…in fact, on second thoughts, I’d rather we were Just Friends”

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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Awwww, shame. I hope you managed to score with some other Deborah in the end. Nice poem, David. :)

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    Date: 4/24/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not a deborah - i bagged a Julie ;-)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Nice poem.