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Bruised

Intoxicated and full of mirth so naive and carefree. Unfurled itself in the breeze that seemed spring. Dreadfully dispersed and torn asunder. Wounds adorn its bosom now; bruised and deformed it waits for the Dusk.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/14/2011 9:59:00 PM
This one has a simple message which resonates with me. I enjoy reading a nice write. ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/13/2011 12:51:00 PM
I finally am getting around to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry, it is truly appreciated Bishnu. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:31:00 AM
Very well written, great form, and such a strong combination and use of powerful words.
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Date: 10/2/2010 5:29:00 AM
Well expressed thoughts on getting bruised, bishnu
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Date: 10/2/2010 4:50:00 AM
enjoyed reading toay...Welcome to poetry soup!
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