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Brotherly Love

We’ve heard of brothers who didn’t love but hated their siblings instead. And there were some who went so far as to want a brother dead. Cain slew Abel, Romulus killed Remus Jacob tricked his brother Esau. And brother killed brother in Civil War, worst the country ever saw. But this is not the way it should be and my own dad and mother raised five sons who didn’t quarrel. Each one truly loved the other. They were taught the Bible story told by the man with many sons. A bundle of sticks can’t be broken but you easily snap just one. My brothers all stayed friends for life and no one came between them. I miss their jokes and jovial talk, its so long now since I’ve seen them. Brother love is a wonderful thing and I saw it personified in my big loving brothers until the day the first one died. Their circle became a bit smaller as they left it one by one. Now my younger brother, sister and I have a circle of our own. By Joyce Johnson April 22, 2011 For Miranda's "Brotherly Love " Contest

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Date: 4/26/2011 12:01:00 PM
Lovely, just Lovely, Joyce, this Rhyme rythmaticly melted my heart...soup mail...Love Randa
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Date: 4/25/2011 4:48:00 PM
Just like Cain and Abel, brothers still kill each other. It was so sad to read the last two verses, Joyce. I am by far the youngest of three siblings and dread the day our tiny circle becomes smaller. Bless you for sharing this touching poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2011 9:26:00 PM
Joyce, a wonderful entry good luck.... I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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Date: 4/23/2011 4:02:00 PM
this is very well written, I have 4 brothers and I still am close with all of them.. Don't know what i would do with out them. Good luck in the contest.. Happy easter as well Cory
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Date: 4/23/2011 3:44:00 PM
vividly portrayed on the concept of brotherly luv Joyce.. good luck in the contest my friend.. u captured the essence of all phases of being a brother with much luv... can relate with my sons and how they feel for each other....
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