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Broken Wings

A newborn butterfly just broke out of her cocoon shell. She spread her orange and black wings and attempted her first flight. She not only flew, she soared through the heavens. The sunlight gave her warmth that she had never known before. Little did she know, that this feeling would not last. This monarch would cross paths with an uncaring, ravenous bird. It grasped the butterfly in it's claws, and with the bird's hungry beak, it tore the precious wings from the monarch. A bird doesn't care who it hurts, as long as it satisfies them. The butterfly was delirious, from the pain and the shock. Her beautiful wings were taken away. She could no longer fly amongst the warm sunlight. She now only knows the despair and the darkness that she used to be. Now that monarch has become a caterpillar. And, death has become her cocoon.

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Date: 3/12/2021 4:02:00 PM
Such a sad life! Unfortunately these things do happen :(
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Date: 3/8/2021 1:10:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem, beautifully penned. The last two lines are fantastic. :-)
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Date: 4/18/2014 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 4/18/2014 8:14:00 PM
The reality of nature is a wild flavour that our domestic palate does not always appreciate.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/20/2014 5:23:00 PM
This kind of thing is a harsh reality of nature that needs to be understood and excepted, instead of just ignored. Thank you for stopping by, Michael. I appreciate it very much! :)
Date: 4/17/2014 1:20:00 AM
Kelly a beautiful depict of the nature's real ways of life ! Congrats on topmost winning poem !
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/19/2014 3:10:00 PM
Thank you very much for stopping by, Dr. Upma! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 7:02:00 PM
A interesting and unique 'take' on nature! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/19/2014 3:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Debbie! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win. An entomological note, Monarchs are generally avoided by birds as they taste terrible because of the Milkweed plant the larvae feed upon exclusively. There is a mimic species (Viceroy) which does not taste so bad but birds avoid because they imitate Monarchs. There are mathematical models of the relative % of each species maximizes survival of both. this Monarchs passing may benefit the species as the bird may well avoid them in the future. May be a poem here.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/19/2014 2:21:00 PM
That is interesting, I did not know that, Dave. You are right, there may be a poem there!...Thank you so much for stopping by. I do appreciate it! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 12:55:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Congrats on your win. Expressive and well told story. All the best. Theresa xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 7:36:00 PM
Hi Theresa, Thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem. I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 11:47:00 AM
Nature can be cruel and you tell it so well. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 7:26:00 PM
Mother Nature can be as cruel, as she is beautiful, I agree...Thank you so much for your kind words, Joyce. :)
Date: 4/16/2014 11:02:00 AM
Very poignant ending ..congrats on the win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 7:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. :)
Date: 4/16/2014 9:38:00 AM
Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 7:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram. It really felt good when I saw my name at the top of the list. :)
Date: 4/16/2014 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful poem Kelly. Reminds me of the many young people who are abused of by predators in real life. // congrats on fine win. // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 12:51:00 AM
This poem was meant to be a metaphor, and you are one of the few who has picked up on that. Thank you very much for stopping by, Paul. I do appreciate it! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 7:57:00 AM
tragic and well spoken. grats on your win. well done ;)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 12:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Casarah! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 6:00:00 AM
congratulations on your first place win obviously pd has made a mistake in numbering her positions nobody would be rude to place top place as 2nd , well done
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 12:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mandy. Your kind words really meant a lot to me! I'm not upset that my poem was given a 2nd place. It still made it to the top of the list, and that was a great feeling! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 1:58:00 AM
Hello Kelly, nice to see you on my winning list again. :)... Big hugs, and smiles... always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:00:00 AM
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Date: 4/16/2014 1:10:00 AM
fantastic poem a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan x
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2014 2:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I do appreciate your kind comments. Hugs :)
Date: 11/26/2013 10:17:00 PM
Kelly Such a happy and sad poem all at the same time. This takes the reader on a journey with the butterfly from being born, living and dying. Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Door Mat poem. Your welcome for all the comments back.
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Date: 9/19/2013 4:10:00 AM
Big congrats on your second place win Kelly that's a well deserved win!!!
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:21:00 PM
Love your super win Kelly, ............ luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/17/2013 10:57:00 AM
nicely written, the line of order in nature. Broken Wings is also a song by Mr. Mister, you can listen/ watch on utube ;}
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Date: 9/14/2013 1:57:00 PM
nature can be so cruel congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on the win :) I felt the harsh suffering of the delicate butterfly...great last line
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Kelly xx
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:50:00 AM
Hi Kelly,, stopping by with hugs & smiles:-) xox (-: CONGRATULATIONS :) on your win. Enjoy my blog "You know where my heart is" when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15906&PoetID=18720 ---Always & Forever xox-Linda-xox
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:36:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Kelly
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