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Broken Wing Ruse

With broken wing She tried to fly A broken wing The ruse she tried On broken wing The sigh, it died For broken wing Her lover cried 12Mar14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/13/2014 1:56:00 PM
Hi r, I've read this elsewhere but was happy to read it again, here... Terry (& thanks for your kind words)
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Date: 3/12/2014 12:19:00 PM
This poem flows flawlessly. It's short and simple and quite beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. Kudos! :)
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Rick Richardson
Date: 3/12/2014 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, JTAP.

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