Broken Waif

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Tune weavers sigh and sigh The unblinking eye Embroider thoughts Tree line Groves Fingered love prints Hearts unfold Cold and broken Tattered and yellow Wistful carousel Going round round and around As surely my heart goes...

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Lucy Harley

Date: 10/17/2019 7:47:00 AM

Really nice!

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 10/17/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Lucy,I enjoyed writing this sad verse. Likewise glad you enjoyed..tonytocaa

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/16/2019 11:57:00 PM

lovely penned

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 10/17/2019 6:01:00 AM

Thank you glad you enjoyed,tonytocaa

Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/13/2015 3:51:00 PM

Tony, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia