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Broken Promise

Troubled thoughts, trickling time, whispering wishes, wasting wine. Staring solemnly, sitting still, persons promise, poisoned pill. Beyond burdened, beckoning bed, drunken, dazed, dizzy, dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/14/2009 4:22:00 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:06:00 AM
very well written again! Jim
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:07:00 PM
Wonderful use of alliteration..I like this very much..BG
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Date: 4/2/2009 2:02:00 PM
A fitting alitteration for the splinter of things.
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:56:00 PM
troubled thoughts,we all have them every now and then,keep strong and thanks for your support,tnks my friend-charma
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