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Broken Pieces

Broken pieces of my heart I left it on the path to mend devoured by the hungry hounds I am sorry this world isn't the place it ought to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/19/2013 4:56:00 PM
There is plenty of room for improvement- all round!
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Ravi Kiran
Date: 9/19/2013 5:37:00 PM
thank you for the advise, i will take that into consideration...

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