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Broken Oaths

It is relentlessly our intent To do the right thing. Why then do we relent— A bird with broken wing? We make earnest pledges Vowing to fly higher. But they fray at the edges— Caught in self-made mire. We would strive to be A friend of welcoming ways. Except they quickly flee— Gliding through wasted days. We pray for a resolution To these earth-bound misses. But we forestall a solution— Opting for self-inflicted hisses.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/26/2015 6:46:00 PM
This was great, I love the flow of it, the message, and everything. Very well done Paul!
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/26/2015 8:22:00 PM
I value and appreciate your comment, Casarah (in fact, I value and appreciate ALL of your comments). Blessings!

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