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Broken Love

Mind brooding I sit, shadows play upon the floor, In turmoil comes, yet once more, scenes I so abhor. Lingering memories, the world turns as before, yet love now gone with no desire to gain restore. Her silken hair, eyes of blue, laughter to adore, a touch so soft like morns breeze set my heart to soar. Gowns satin, finest lace, and jewels in galore, a smile so warm men swoon, her favor to implore. Come early home there brought a sound I must explore, two bound in loves embrace viewed through bed chamber door. My eyes must lie, through tears a scene of sins amour, my love, my very breath... deceiving wanton whore. Robert Gene Stoner Jr © 1/12/17

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/6/2017 6:34:00 PM

Wow! Very strong emotional write, Robert, ~*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/6/2017 3:09:00 PM

Where are you Robert? I am missing you and your wonderful poetry. Hugs, Connie

Mark Martin

Date: 1/30/2017 3:22:00 PM

Great poem about the inner turmoil following betrayal! Congrats! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2017 8:00:00 PM

wow, a dramatic one, and I love that last word you gave it!! STrong poetry. One of my favorites on this list.

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/28/2017 8:21:00 PM

Thanks Andrea appreciate the read and comment. Yours had such flow and grace I can easily see how John put you on the top tier. Knowing you are not most favorable to classic style verbiage your appreciation is all the more appreciated.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/28/2017 11:12:00 AM

Great write Robert, those who have been there, recognize the sentiment, great win!

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/28/2017 12:25:00 PM

Thank you John for a placement and the opportunity to explore this form and muse.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/28/2017 8:19:00 AM

Emotions of broken heart and betrayal , Robert, very well written.

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/28/2017 8:44:00 AM

Thank you Eve for the read and kind words of support on this piece. I found it interesting when a fellow replied of his own experience in this situation. A tone was touched tying reality to art. Facebook actually denied publication of this piece on inappropriate content, I appealed as it is art to no avail.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/28/2017 7:16:00 AM

Nothing can disrupt the emotions more than passionate love. The pain expressed in this poem is palpable Robert. I love the feel of it being set in an ancient timeless period. Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 : )

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/28/2017 8:17:00 AM

Thanks for the read and insight on this effort Connie your support is always much appreciated.