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"broken Hearted"

Meeting you makes my heart smile, Thinking of you makes my feet walk even it's a thousand miles, Sadness is always there when I see you with her, But pretending is the best way to see you happy forever. One day I see you crying beside, I go near you and walked behind, Asking about your problem and telling why, You say nothing and you hugged me tight. You told me that you and her broke up, I thanked God and tell if it's the time to grow back, I think it's the destiny that makes my heart calm, My sadness is gone and tears dried up. But then again my hopes were broken, When you told me you want to be with her again, I smiled at you and said of course you can, My heart broke up when you say you're really are my friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 6:32:00 PM
This is heartbreaking to read... which only adds to the allure of the writing. I commend you on turning sadness into beauty. I love this piece. This is one of the most amazing things I've read in awhile....Wow!!
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:28:00 PM
thank you ^_-
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alexis. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2010 9:11:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write today with its lovely theme.. expressed so vividly.. hope your time on Soup is special and fun.. and u will check out the contest scene offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:47:00 AM
There seems to be a good love triagle, mary
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