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Broken-Hearted

I wonder if you know? How my heart aches so There’s nothing I can say To stop you from carrying on this way Brought together by fate A friendship we did create Sisters to the heart and soul No one would ever know Though we didn’t share a blood Mother But I love you like no other Threaded together in a life of strife The pain cuts like a knife To watch you take those pills And see you oh so ill If I could take away the pain The pain that makes you think I can’t see you sink Into a darker dark When did all this start? My patients are running thin Hiding won’t make you win This battle of addiction Again I have to listen To those daily doses of wonder and questions that come from under Can you feel the braking heart of your sister? This was written for my sister who lives with addiction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/30/2008 5:07:00 PM
I hope your sister breaks her addiction. It is terrible, I know how you must feel. One of my friends is useing heroin,cocaine, and meth. this is a good dedication to her.
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Date: 9/26/2008 5:18:00 PM
How very heart breaking this must be for you to see your sister like this. Very nicely written, expressions from the heart............Blessings, Janice
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Date: 9/25/2008 3:46:00 PM
I understand your pain, my sister was also addicted to drugs, but she has been clean now for 12 years, an even though she no longer uses it is a battle that she fihgts all the time, i am so sorry, and I know how painful this is, you and your sister are in my thoughts and my prayers, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/25/2008 3:57:00 AM
How very heartbreaking. I hope she finds peace within herself - keep the faith and never give up. Love Kristin
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Date: 9/24/2008 8:18:00 PM
I lost mine to addiction and suicide. Keep the faith my friend. Never tire as a sister, never stop loving. It's awfully hard when we don't give our all and find them gone...
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Date: 9/24/2008 3:04:00 PM
So difficult to see someone we love struggle. A sadness, and helpless tragic situation, when all we can do is stand by. I am so sorry you seeing someone you love going through such a nightmare. Have faith that she will heal, and overcome in time. Prayers.......Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2008 2:59:00 PM
Laura- I feel your pain and hope. You care and that really matters. She's blessed to have a sister like you. Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your sister. Michael
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Date: 9/24/2008 2:25:00 PM
Dear Laura, Truly an amazing work of POETIC Genius "Though we didn't share a blood Mother I can remember, growing in foster homes and they were MOM, DAD, Brother, Sister Until the next home. I feel the hurt in YOUR HEART YOU are extremely talented I would have made this POEM "a DEDICATION" YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 9/24/2008 1:42:00 PM
Oh Laura, I am so sorry. Can feel your heart breaking through your words. Hoping and praying for the best possible outcome. Life sure throws some difficult challenges our way, no doubt about it. Hang in there. Hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 9/24/2008 1:23:00 PM
a very touching piece and feel for you hope everything turns out ok. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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