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Broken Glass

Hearts stopped beating a silence that craved emotion and a feeling your cupid could never forget those words carved meticulously onto my delicate but bruised skin a demon in disguise as a beautiful angel manipulating pretty whispers into sin Forever words only a fleeting destiny as the rusty nail pierces another vein the pain pulses as memories of you pass and you leaving me dripping a reflection of my former self lost once more walking upon shards of my own broken glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/11/2016 10:38:00 PM
I sure can feel that pain, great write!
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Date: 12/9/2016 2:38:00 PM
Being someone shattered into smithereens, I GET you... i get you... you managed to put it into words that cut right into the heart of it, of you.
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Date: 12/9/2016 1:41:00 PM
Pretty dark, Tim. Poems usually reflect a mood. Hoping you are well my friend:)
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Date: 12/9/2016 10:58:00 AM
Ouch, ouch, ouch, ok I did enjoy this but I feel your pain. I've found best to let those painful memories go. Well written though sad.
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:14:00 AM
This is such an excellent piece, Tim! Written as only you could have done it reflecting deep emotions and imagery!
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:05:00 AM
Great write, Tim!
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:03:00 AM
Ouch X 10. Your inimitable style only from the dark side! Especially like V2. Three wowsas and a seven. cheers and cherubs ~ j
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:55:00 AM
Whoa Tim, this was deep and very sad, but beautifully written sadness. This one hurt.
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