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Broken Dreams

The games you always play while in my bed you lay I weaken at your touch Sometimes it just gets to much I thought I found someone new I thought I found some one who Had it all... had it all But my dreams fell apart... fell apart It fell apart along with my heart. I wonder how we survived the regrets and past mistakes Couldn't help myself over you as you played with my heart I thought I found someone new I thought I found someone who Had it all...had it all But my dreams fell apart... fell apart It fell apart along with my heart. We laughed and we cried Slowly a part of us had died We slowly drifted away As we said our goodbye. 03/02/16 lyrics

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Date: 3/4/2016 8:05:00 PM
this one is quite lyrical, Phyllis and filled with sadness. I really like it.
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Date: 2/3/2016 4:05:00 PM
nice. LINDA
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/14/2016 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Linda. I am slow in my replies but glad your enjoyed this lyrical poem. love phyl
Date: 2/3/2016 1:33:00 PM
- This is beautiful and written with deep emotion, dear Phyllis - Wonderful to read a 7, thanks - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/14/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise.Guess I am listening to much to sad songs on lost love. It gave me the inspiration to try and do a lyrical poem. love phyl
Date: 2/3/2016 12:52:00 PM
The last line really hit me... bit of a knot in my throat now.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/14/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my lyrics. love phyl
Date: 2/3/2016 12:40:00 PM
Such an emotional piece with effective repetitions, strong phrasing and imagery. heartbraking... Well done Phyl! Best wishes, Keith
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/14/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Keith for your comment on my poem. love phyl

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