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Broken Cities

It's time for an oldie Broken cities all around where nothing is actually beautiful anymore, pain in people’s eyes will nothing change I have to leave. ?Please God fix it all up I don’t want to see another broken soul. Nothing good ever comes out of here, so much potential lost each year. Good people are made into slaves all the while oblivious to what they’ve become. Streetlights everywhere but no light being thrown. Judgement cast by strangers lack of care makes me sick, how did we become so lost in ourselves with no love for each other? Nothing good ever comes out of here, so much potential lost each year.

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Date: 2/12/2024 1:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:29:00 PM
jared, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 9/9/2015 3:12:00 PM
JARED, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2014 6:26:00 AM
Nothing good ever!
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