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Broken

Bemused girl where did she go Running from her sins she committed long ago Opaque she disguised herself like a pro Kindness she craved for someone to show Echoing voices repeating she would never grow No eventually she would be free of this plateau

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/3/2016 9:41:00 PM
Mesmerizing writing..Rahab
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Date: 11/14/2016 11:34:00 AM
On a sunless day on this autumn she will know..... or may be when the thunder is chasing the snow..... very nice
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Date: 10/27/2016 2:53:00 PM
Wow.... Amazing.....skat
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Date: 10/25/2016 2:47:00 PM
Well done Sofia...
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Date: 10/24/2016 6:32:00 PM
What a write! powerful! Please review and let me know what you think of my latest poem as well :)
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