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Broken

A wounded heart cried, filled its lonely glass Held and felt with anguished hands of sorrow To pray memories fade as tears trespass Through years and time her love had to borrow I try to remember where love went wrong Only fragmented pictures from the day She disappeared as her shadow grew long A marbled world turned quietly to clay Cataclysm within covering dreams With nothing to recognize or to save My eyes counted tears with thinning long streams and scattered monuments of yesterday I felt a breath shared with a pain that's kept and found a heart wounded as its eyes wept

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/27/2015 11:59:00 AM
Yes you are ---- romantic but not a fool ;) Light & Love
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Date: 4/24/2015 6:20:00 PM
Powerful pen Fredric! Excellent sonnet on lost love pain and despair,dear friend.A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 4/24/2015 4:28:00 PM
Fredric, This is one beautiful sonnet, worthy of Shakespeare
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Date: 4/24/2015 4:18:00 PM
a simply stunning sonnet on lost love - Frederic you excel as this form - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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