Broken

I find myself in this moment While other moments fade away Held entranced by the torment Of self loathing and dismay Is life supposed to be so hard to bare What is the purpose in all of this Do I work hard or idly not care When is my time to find bliss Broken I seem to always be Broken Broken Something that can't be fixed Broken Empty , drained and so hollow A mindless creature , a clone Numb, all I feel is sorrow All on me for the seeds i've sown Nothing left , all is faded Do I accept what is left of me End of my climb , so jaded Need this now , too set me free Brandon Harvey 02-11-2014 -posted 04-11-2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/4/2014 8:16:00 AM

this reality that at times we fall into the edge of nothingness.. [i did too, how many times] however, it didn't push me more to be stuck on such situation instead what I did is to stand and start again and pray to still thank God of what has been.. isn't it the greatest glory of man isn't in never falling but in rising to each fall.... as the adage says.. it isn;t easy but life is all worth to go on standing and rising.. sad sad sentiments.. hold on to God, as to Him nothing is impossible. :)

Brandon Harvey
Date: 11/5/2014 1:04:00 AM

Thank you Olive , God is truly Great and through him we shine . hugs Brandon xx