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Broad Shoulders

Your born with broad shoulders. Yet, may wither once older. The worlds weight on your back, Will remain like a tack. This is the way life goes on, Do not look to frown apon. Being happy is the key, Once you reach this you'll see. Your not meant to just smolder, Your born with broad shoulders. Made to give and not receive, Acts of greed will just deceive. Ride the waves for the moment, Being the best component. Once your great story is heard, You will not be deferred. Destiny will never lie, Righteouness will soon defy. As the world becomes colder, Stand strong with your broad shoulders.

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Date: 6/30/2015 5:05:00 PM
Hi Brinks P, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/29/2015 11:41:00 PM
Brinks, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/29/2015 9:12:00 PM
A nice first submission to the site, Brinks. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy sharing and reading on this site with this happy bunch scattered around the globe. Have fun. Regards, Viv
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