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Brittan Y and Josh

Brittany is the name of the girl that has my heart Right away with a smile and a stare into her eyes I fell for her I knew I had to be hers Thoroughly I thought about leaving who I was with Together we were meant to be, so I tried And now we are a happy couple Never did we think that we would be together Yesterday we were just friends now we are lovers Although we have haters Never will they get in our way Don’t get mad because people don’t know how to shut up Just think that at the end of the day you are the one that says good night baby, not them Only you get to enjoy the good times I offer So don’t get mad when they say stuff about us just remember How you get to be my only one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/14/2010 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Josh for your comments on my poem. I think you are missing a lot by not reading and reading will make you a better writer if that is your passion. My best to you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2010 4:59:00 AM
I enjoyed the piece. Nicely pennd
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Date: 4/14/2010 4:06:00 AM
Different..Sara
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