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Brimming With Echoes

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Brimming With Echoes

Brimming with echoes of their past
When I dream of theses places 
I sometimes feel alone here
I look around me and all I see
Is a nothing a void in place 
I should  be happy and free

What is it that you tell me to do
Where is it that you tell me to go
Where I should go in this desert 
Why should I stay in this desert
There is nothing for me  there
I seek refuge out of all this mess
I seek out a friendly face to hold 

A friendly face to hold me 
To comfort me in sad times 
And keep me from the cold 
Cold dark damp places I see
Sad times of sorrow and grief
I choose to leave this place 
Seek the road to  happiness

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Still loving the ending of this one. How you choose to leave and seek happiness. Can't seem to find a poem I have not read yet. I am clicking in circles. haha.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Mostly, that's the best/only 'therapy' ('seek the road...')... Nice, sad (with hope) poem... Terry (You have a lot of 'echo' poems, all of them well done!)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/9/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading Terry ;}
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:47:00 PM
    wow, this says so much, Debbie, I searched about and finally was able to find this one of yours I had not read yet. Very good one!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/15/2013 2:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 8/7/2012 7:31:00 PM
    This endless dreary that drags us down. We wake in the morning still wearing a frown. We look up to heaven to answer our plight. Awaiting an angel to get through the night.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/7/2012 8:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes the endless tail-end of a relationship that drags you down ;} ,,, thank you for reading ;}
  1. Date: 6/10/2011 6:19:00 PM
    beautiful title, beautiful piece of creative work.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/7/2012 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you James,,,, blessings of the day,,,, thank you for reading ;}
  1. Date: 5/30/2011 5:24:00 AM
    Your title brings the reader in and your words keep us there... Beautiful Poetry...Michael

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/30/2011 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Michael ;}