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Bright Shining Sun

Just over the horizon is the sun Showing the glorious enormous dot It shows how the day has surely begun Something I don’t forget, as none forgot Sun shines immensely right there on the spot None presents nature better than this sight It’s mightier than what is shown at night The lovely sun brightens everything here Now rising further up the sky just right People here on Earth surely seem to care Russell Sivey

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Len Gasun

Date: 4/5/2014 11:20:00 PM

Hugging this precious masterpiece my dear friend Russell. I love it so much. A perfect poem that portraits the perfect beauty of the sun. Again, thank u so much for sharing! I'll be back to read more of your stellar work. Happy weekend! love lots, Leonora

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2014 3:47:00 PM

beautiful uplifting write, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/31/2014 1:27:00 PM

i had a wonderful experience watching the sunrise this weekend on an island, rusell.. you art-piece glows and brightens my day with such pleasant images... this is awesome!.. huggs

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/31/2014 12:37:00 PM

Hi Russell; hope you are doing good. I love your poem I also love the sun rise and the sun set. We do need the sun to make our days bright. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2014 7:30:00 AM

Sunrise, sunset, swiftly flow the days seedlings turn overnight to sunflowers even as we gaze...Enjoyed reading your creative work about the beginning of day..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/31/2014 5:40:00 AM

Of course " It’s mightier than what is shown at night" for moon couldn't be seen without its light! A beautiful hymn to the Sun, my friend Russell!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/30/2014 11:07:00 PM

Nice write Russell. Verlena