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Brewing Sunsets In Teapots

I brew sunsets in teapots I drink the dawn from a mug and in my bicycle basket I have seduction in a jug so now and then I take someone clean shaven home to my obliging bed when I guess I should sit quietly pristine, with my legs crossed instead but each day is so fragile they black out every evening in the west and all I got is these frail minutes and I only want to live them, as if they were a fest. © Gry W Christensen

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/16/2015 8:17:00 PM

Your verses always inspire me to write. First three lines = solid gold my friend! Those three lines set the tone for the rest and the rest was great as well.. Super 7 on this write and thanks for the inspiration for my new write..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/16/2015 6:14:00 AM

Woah artsy and imaginative in a winsome poetic kind of way that i found so appealing. Some brew storms in a teacup but sunset in a teapot is a charming fig. idea. Nice to read u again.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/17/2014 5:27:00 PM

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/14/2014 4:58:00 PM

Very pretty verses! Enjoyed visiting with you today.i enjoyed the nice trip into your world my dear friend. Loll A 7 for me! :) Love and Hugs! xxx D.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/14/2014 5:47:00 PM

Don't worry about it, all poets and writers do this fictional thing sometimes quite often...I do! :) Lol. ..xxxx D.

Gry Christensen
Date: 11/14/2014 5:04:00 PM

Hey Dorian, thanks so much for reading and your always nice comments. This poem is strictly fictional, my husband is the only man I take to bed. LOL This write is simply a reaction of some articles I read recently about how a "true" woman should be and act, that I did not agree with. I believe in freedom and enjoying every minute of life as if it was the last.