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Beautiful Brenda was bewitched by a man she created in her novel, Blissfully absorbed in her imagination with this man she marveled. Boats and the sea were his lifelong passions. Besotted with the ocean, it sparked supreme satisfaction. Beguiled with this boater, Dan, the author had imagined, Brenda futilely fantasized about this blue-eyed man with abandon. By chance, she was invited on a cocktail cruise with some friends. Brenda decided she needed a break from her passionless pretend. Blustery and brilliant, the day azurely arrived. Brenda was unaware a blind date had been craftily contrived. Befuddled at first she met this new man called Ben. Blushing and irresistible, the inevitable dance began. Ben was uncannily alike the magnificent man in her book, Brawny, with a sensational smile that required a second look. Ben was the boat owner, and loved the seductive sea like Dan. But he was not imaginary, and the romance took off and ran! 9/10/16 Written for "Brenda" Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward Awarded 1st Place

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Date: 10/11/2016 4:09:00 PM
Well written, Brenda, great alliteration and a happy ending! I enjoyed your story and congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/11/2016 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/11/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Wayne! :)
Date: 10/11/2016 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations, Brenda, what could be more fitting. Fine storyline for the prompt, Julia gave us.
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/11/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Reason A. Poteet. The prompt was challenging with the alliteration requirements, and the storyline was fun.
Date: 10/11/2016 10:21:00 AM
I enjoyed your B-B-B-Brenda and congratulate you. All the best ... CayCay
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/11/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you CayCay!
Date: 10/11/2016 8:30:00 AM
wow Brenda! love this it's so cute and clever and amazing lady :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/11/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Laura. The win is extra special since my name is Brenda. :)
Date: 10/11/2016 7:10:00 AM
Cute story! Congrats!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/11/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Kim! :)
Date: 10/11/2016 1:03:00 AM
Very good Brenda, well deserved win :-)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/11/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Eve! :)
Date: 9/11/2016 6:34:00 PM
Very nicely done! I love happy endings!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/11/2016 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Joe, so do I! I should look for a boatman for myself. :)
Date: 9/10/2016 7:25:00 PM
Written for the contest "Brenda" 9/10/16
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Julia Ward
Date: 6/11/2017 3:00:00 PM
My congratulations have disappeared from view! Here they are again... Well done for your win in my contest, Brenda.

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