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Breathing An Evening Song

Restful twilight shades This side of the spinning earth And the stars awaken

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Mike T

Date: 4/22/2012 3:37:00 PM

Evocative and complete, which many haikus are not. The last line is pure gold!

Jennifer Cahill
Date: 4/22/2012 5:48:00 PM

Thank you, Mike. I am especially flattered by your words.

Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/22/2012 3:20:00 PM

I like it!! Its tranquility brought a smile and a lift to my heart..Thanks for sharing Jennifer... Love Diana

Jennifer Cahill
Date: 4/22/2012 5:47:00 PM

Thanks Daina. I am usually shy about responding to comments and/ or critiquing other poets' work, but I am flattered and felt that I should starting expressing my appreciation when others comment on my work.