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Breathe Me

out from under from lovin you free from your overtaking embrace still dreaming falling from grace always leaving can you see what i see breathe me take it in never meeting the end never let you down only say that after i hit the hard ground let it be breathe me feel what i feel the pain unable to heal it is a shame how we let this go on so broken so wrong i have crossed the line to many times find the key breathe me unlock all the doors that shut you out set the spirts FREE breath me

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Date: 3/3/2010 6:43:00 PM
Great poem, i love this one its very creative, Keep making great poems Autumm, you have a Beautiful name
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Date: 11/9/2009 12:48:00 PM
Sounds like yogic breathing! I like the way you use the phrase. Thanks for your kind words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:49:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this awesome piece with us today Autumn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 6:04:00 PM
Good one Autumn, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/14/2009 5:27:00 PM
Nice poem. Thanks, Kim
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