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Breathe Blue Light

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Breathe Blue Light

cedar blue evening
day breath held beneath titans
sun offers me stairs

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  1. Date: 5/12/2015 12:06:00 PM
    Enjoyable haiku Love SKAT

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:00:00 PM
    seeing this one again. it is so beautiful.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:22:00 AM
    You've painted a fascinating view or image through your creative words in you haiku my dear friend Sheri. The cedar blue...and it's a breathtaking beauty indeed. Thank you so much for sharing! You're such a gifted poet too! I'll come back and read more of your work ok? Thank you so much especially for joining my contest. love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 3:12:00 PM
    A nicely captured moment. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 5:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sheri. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:40:00 PM
    This is metaphorical haiku, which I happen to really like though some say not to use metaphors in haiku. I think it makes it very beautiful, Sheri. REally lovely this one! SEe ya. Andrea

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 10:37:00 AM
    Wow! The bonnet of your poem is amazing. gee I really love this haiku, adding it as a favorite here on the soup. The glare of your sight feels like endless to me. Deep and I love it, (Lin~Ra)

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 6:25:00 AM
    Nice haiku! What are the "titans"? Are they the giant planets? Intresting! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 10:50:00 PM
    A vivid haiku that's such a joy to read-- really liked your last line here-- how it contrasted with you first line-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 2:39:00 PM
    I have seen the blue cedar and it is good... stairs to heaven I have not seen yet but would like to. good work my friend!

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 12:00:00 PM
    The titans are the cedar--they have the color, but they make the stairs and are giant, thanks for the welcomes everyone :) Sheri

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 11:56:00 AM
    This poem is quite evocative! Who are the "titans"? As to astronomy I once went to a "star party" and saw the rings around a distant planet. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish "

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 12:49:00 PM
    This is a superb haiku! I really dig the imagery and premise. Welcome to PoetrySoup!~Chris

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 3:37:00 PM
    What a lovely blue evening..lovely indeed--Charma

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 8:58:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sheri. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 2:38:00 PM
    Such a beautiful haiku, Sheri! And you can write to an author by going to one of their poems and clicking on the soup bowl next to their name at the top of the poem. It's called Soup mail. To check your own mail, just click on the "My Soup Mail" in the left-hand column. Welcome to poetry soup! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 1:04:00 PM
    Such lovliness in a simple haiku! Nice one!!~ Carrie