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Breathe

When the night claims you like a wayward leaf of old and it takes you to the caves where anything turns gold you don't ask any questions and you don't dare breathe you just follow her, like a light weight tumbled weed Down the passages of dark, down the staircase of rune every step a little deeper than the crevices of moon you can almost taste the air, on your tonguing clepe you can down the stars of heaven in one single leap Taking you by the waist it shall dance you through the elixir of happiness when your feeling down n' blue you just thank the Lord for the magic of this gift all you need is skin n' eyes to cross her lowly rift When night claims you like a wayward leaf of old and takes you to her caves, all etched with gold don't ask her any questions just go ahead breathe no, don't ask her anything at all, just breathe, yes breathe... Written by: Mystic Rose ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Inhale the mystery of her dark gaze As the stars up above are set ablaze She'll mesmerize with the melody she plays You'll ask her no questions, you'll simply obey Her Midas touch will turn the moon to gold As her dark gaze turns icy cold You'll breathe in her fragrance as she passes by You'll ask her no questions, you'll simply comply Your heart will melt in her seductive embrace Making you forget your fall from grace And as she whispers to you, soft and tender You'll ask her no questions, you'll simply surrender Inhale the mystery of her dark gaze As she lights up your heart, and passions blaze But when you awaken, to leave, she'll seethe You'll ask her no questions, you'll simply breathe Yes, breathe .......... 12/30/15 -----------------------------------------------

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Date: 3/7/2016 12:09:00 PM
Good win.pd
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Date: 1/3/2016 5:09:00 PM
I finally figured out how this contest was. I sure hope to try it!!
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Date: 12/30/2015 10:11:00 PM
Very beautifully done!!!!enjoyed very much! Best of luck..
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Joseph May
Date: 12/30/2015 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Donna..good to see you!
Date: 12/30/2015 8:16:00 PM
wow, this is awesome!!! Did Mystic write it with you?? I have not read the requirements of the contest yet, but it sounded like a collaboration contest or something. I sure do love this, Joseph!!
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Joseph May
Date: 12/30/2015 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, It is a collaboration contest...she wrote the first 4 quatrains which is on the contest page..glad you liked it Andrea

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