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Breath Rises

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Breath Rises

warm breath exhaled, illusionary smoke in frigid night air.



Written December 8th, 2013

First attempt at this form.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 7:57:00 AM
    Very beautiful write my friend! You certainly have a way with words indeed..loved it!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again.
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 11:57:00 PM
    hey for your first one, this is better than a lot I am seeing around here!!! I mean it!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/10/2013 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading all four.
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:12:00 AM
    This is lovely as well, but I think that I like the one about laughing through the tears the most, Richard.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/9/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Eileen, I think I do as well. I value your judgement so I am glad we chose the same one.
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 8:17:00 AM
    a breathing soul in the dark beautifully drawn

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/9/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Liam, a very poetic response.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/9/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Becca, these are fun.
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Awesome endeavor, Richard!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/9/2013 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again AO
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:33:00 AM
    Very deep thought, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr.Ram.