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Breath in poetry

take me breath
to the freshest space

let me breathe
in freedom
in your deepest dive

escort me breath
with your tenderness

to kiss words
and carve verses

bring me breath
to my poetic  temples
there i can spell out
my heart’s vibrations

physical thoughts

no tightness 
no depressed


vocalized  tune
shared  the thoughts 
spread the love

leave me breath
leave me there
in my poetic temples

 ~ (c) Sukmawati komala ~ 
04 March 2013

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  1. Date: 4/12/2013 3:57:00 PM
    very romantic here, love it Suki,,,, thank you for liking my Caturday ;} I'm trying to writ good haiku's you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:53:00 PM
    Lovely progression and wonderful action that tells the story beautifully Suki, the last line has such elegance. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:33:00 AM
    This is lovely, deep and beautiful a poem dear. Yes you really seem to be breathing poetry. Well done and many thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 10:14:00 PM
    What an amazing ending! So full of passion and devotion! :) Thanks for sharing your words and heart with us. Also, thanks for your post on my poem. I responded and am touched by your visit! Hugs!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:13:00 PM
    Suk, this is a deep poem, with many levels of meaning !! Jag

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 3:36:00 PM
    Oh yes this is amazing poetry, so sensuous, so much depth in feeling...

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:46:00 AM
    Always so beautiful, soft and caring - Thanks, Sukmawati - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:58:00 AM
    lovely lines...i can feel myself within...

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Hello my dearest SK! This is another excellent write/free verse of yours which I've extremely enjoyed reading tonight. So love it my very dear friend, yes.. the breath of our greatest passion, poetry. Thank you so much for sharing another precious gems of yours and your lovely visit. love and big big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:26:00 PM
    You are really good with this style of free verse. I love the reference to the poetic temples and the breath.