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Breath

When breath returns sweeter, From its journey into you. Sent so softly on its way, To blend and gently wend, Its path to feed your heart. When breath comes eking softly, a returning theif it seems. Bringing its treasures forth, And brushing against a dream. Sweetly it stirs the soul. Oh how breath comes dancing. The music of its step. Rising to move as in a swathe. Like swaying summer wheat, in the fields of the lovers' lands. When the breath returns so sweetly, From its journey so divine. The story of its temporary capture, Speaks beguiled wonder. And comes to fill my mind. Then gathering like soft seasons' rains, To loose ourselves and sigh. The breath we share, Is tenderly given to beauty, sent so sweetly forth, Again......again......and again ................and again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/25/2015 8:04:00 AM
LOVE this - totally enjoyed - thanks!! AND CONGRATS on the feature!
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Dave Taylor
Date: 1/25/2015 9:04:00 AM
Hi Jean, thankyou for you lovely feedback. Dave
Date: 1/5/2015 5:11:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Dave - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 4:42:00 PM
Dave,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/4/2015 3:03:00 PM
hi Dave and a warm welcome to Soup the correct form is personification and you have done breath proud. The more you comment on other the more you will be read and commented on again welcome hugs
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