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Breaking Up With You

Our relationship has become quite hostile Yet you ride by on your unicorn and smile There's only one thing left to do And that is to break up with you Your smiles now turn to tears As you gallop through the stars Soon you'll disappear Leaving just your avatar

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/22/2014 1:36:00 PM

Congrats on your great win my friend!!!!!

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 5:54:00 PM

Joseph, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/20/2014 12:16:00 AM

Wow a great one Joseph ! A perfect break up ,, congrats on huge win !

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/19/2014 6:47:00 PM

Ha good one Joseph, I like that. Grats on your win ;)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 7:12:00 AM

Congratulations, Joseph, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Joseph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 12:56:00 AM

WOW, Joseph, you had me at UNICORN and smile...LOL... I love this.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA