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Breaking Slowly

Somehow I lost me Transition to less of me and more of you No moments my own Feeling like I am drowning Lacking oxygen it’s ****ing stifling I don’t want to lose you But do I lose me instead This is not me I need space, air, time just to be You use to get that Once you understood me Now it’s more about possessing me Like your property

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/7/2013 12:54:00 PM

This is a very nice beginning quill... Bravo~A.O

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/23/2013 4:45:00 AM

A very strong emotional first effort my dear Abigale! Welcome... I will read more! Hugs, Jack xox

Ale A A
Date: 2/23/2013 5:03:00 AM

Hi Jack thank you.

Debra Falgout

Date: 1/24/2013 11:42:00 AM

The hope is to one day find yourself again, Time will find you back because you will not be happy until you do, a person sometimes can change us to the point of unhappiness, you will come back a much stronger person once you do, good luck, love debra

Iveren Ikyembe

Date: 1/23/2013 1:02:00 AM

Really lovely poem!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 1/16/2013 2:06:00 PM

Ooooo...I love how you've penned these words. Very good!! Always follow your heart. :) Regards INK-U-SCRIPT

Ayesha Karim

Date: 1/16/2013 9:04:00 AM

I can relate to what you're talking about. It sucks when you are misunderstood you cannot relax chill be yourself and live your life doing what you want to do. Like writing poems going bowling or going out with friends hopefully getting involved with a handsome man and in my case finishing my Senior year in college and wanting to meet Mr. Right have a nice wedding and babies..

Edward Orozco

Date: 1/16/2013 1:30:00 AM

We don't know what we have until we lose it. Sadly one comes along that knows what he's found she keeps it forever . Good piece :) - Edward

Mash Mulla
Date: 2/27/2013 10:27:00 PM

Nice one!!