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Breakfast

Crunchy asteroids Wet sand, cotton stones, masks, corn Swimming in my bowl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Jay Loveless
Date: 10/19/2009 10:48:00 AM
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makes me think of different kinds of cerial in a bowl =) do you mix them all together? i do sometimes lol...hey next time your spaced try cerial with soda, like pepsi or coke or dr pepper lol its really not as bad as it sounds X.X
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Date: 7/17/2009 11:55:00 AM
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Creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Enjoyed it. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 6/29/2009 4:41:00 PM
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I thank my lucky stars for breakfast. Vince
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L'Nass Shango
Date: 5/29/2009 7:40:00 AM
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Brother, you are all originality ... mind blowingly good.
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Sharon Winter
Date: 5/20/2009 6:58:00 AM
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Such a unique writing style you own! There is something light and happy here for sure. Well, it's breakfast! Written way different than I have ever read it before! Want to thank you for all your comments. I must admit much of your work is way above my head. That doesn't say much for me. Apologies. I will try. Love, Shar
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Raul Moreno
Date: 5/17/2009 10:36:00 PM
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NIce imagery and descriptions, Welcome to Poetrysoup...Raul
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Lena Townsend
Date: 5/17/2009 8:44:00 PM
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This is very creative. Makes one look at breakfast in a whole new way. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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Izzy Gumbo
Date: 5/17/2009 7:55:00 PM
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omg! Cosmic Wheeties! I love it :)
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Alley Poe
Date: 5/17/2009 6:28:00 PM
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Wow i felt the crunch... -Alley
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Christopher Higgins
Date: 5/17/2009 1:50:00 PM
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wonderful...this haiku made me smile..love the images.
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Edward Orozco
Date: 5/17/2009 11:13:00 AM
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Beautiful, so simple and to the point! - jeremiah
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