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Break-Up On the Smolenka

BREAK-UP ON THE SMOLENKA Sun higher, days brighter, Miracle of the sun god - Hard hearts melt : A cold coming but a warm arrival. Funeral for old ice floes Moving slowly hesitantly Nudging each other gently Like a crowd at a graveside gathering. Flat geometric white sheets, Darker, thinner, as death approaches. Life’s jigsaw undone. Rigid white bodies shrivel, Transformed from stillness to moving life. Cold soul of the ice dies, Garbage stains disappear; Baptism of new flows, River is reborn of water warm. ………………………………………………………………………………………………. Note From the bridge over the Smolenka at this time of year you will see this, as the ice melts.

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Date: 4/6/2015 5:02:00 AM
Very interesting poem with two interesting opposing concepts which are warmth and cold that are diametrically opposed to each other. You have been writing poems for quite a while. How did you get started? Read some of my latest poems. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran
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