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Break time


Orange, the imprisoning one,
Shadow frost's highlights purple,
On outlined clouds , bruise etched,
With the on coming blue.

A industry drain pool,
Ravine's border dusted,
With chaos of wild flowers,
Top water insects,dance the glass.

West trees are tipped the hue,
From center warmth,
Car turf surrounds,
Drought patched, sun squeezed.

A dark monarch on a streetlight perched,
Its black-wings squalls at my intrusion,
Of his black-top pickings,
Gull also waits for my turned back

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  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:12:00 PM
    Jonathan,, :-) Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 4:28:00 AM
    hi Jonathan a beautiful picture portrayed here congrats on feature Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 5:31:00 PM
    Johnathan do tell me something of your background ... I need help to assimilate your beauty into an interpretative frame. I feel a technological paradigm and so many other new things here, perhaps if I can define it you are about to spearhead a new movement somewhere between T. S. Eliot and Salvador Dally. Awesomely good.

  1. Date: 12/22/2009 7:09:00 AM
    I love your phrasing, your imageries, the sharp cadence of your tone ... all the facts that say you are good. Indeed I am honored to have this talent and genius as a friend ... I am encouraged to rediscover my better self because of your higher write. One love

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 1:09:00 PM
    Awesome imagery in this piece, Johnathon! I got lost with your words. Excellent Poetry! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 4:59:00 AM
    Interesting observations or is it that you pen them so well. I think so. Nice work here. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 7:43:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery, Johnathon. Good job! Carolyn