Brave Heart

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You were at that time barely a lad Waking up so cruely to the evil ways of men. So much pain in your eyes I've seen, And all I could do, is to give you, that bouquet, then. Like a breeze the years passed us by, You grew up into the finest man and a fair maid I became. Till a very good day among us again you returned And with all your love you stirred my heart's flames. Somehow we both knew it just right there and then That one way or the other we were both meant to be. Our love was sealed from the beginning to the end of time And forever and ever you and I we would always be. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp200 Copyright@2014 Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014

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James Fraser

Date: 11/28/2014 4:13:00 PM

Dorian, love the warmth in this poem, it's so hugging, James :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/3/2014 11:39:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend James! Truly appreciate it all! have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/24/2014 6:50:00 PM

very beautifully painted piece dorian excellent pen dear pal

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/24/2014 9:18:00 PM

My very dear friend Liam, thank you so much for dropping by and very awesome comment! Much appreciated indeed! Have a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! ^o^xxxx D.