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I am the Monster in your head, I am the weight that holds you down I am the Darkness in your heart and the Hate that swirls around I am the night that brings you terror, I am the loneliness within I am the prodding and the taunting that's behind your every Sin You are the captive of disease You are the weaker of the two You are the prisoner inside that I've beaten black and blue You'll squirm and scream inside And beg me for control But I'm the monster in your head, and the shatter in your soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/22/2015 10:42:00 PM
DANA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:02:00 AM
powerful dark write... nice pen... nad!
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Date: 2/16/2015 3:31:00 PM
Certainly it grabs and holds onto your attention! :) john.
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:55:00 PM
You poem uses unusual and imaginative inferences and superlatives to make a statement and is clever in their use. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:43:00 PM
oh so dark and sad in the vivid imagery in this write Dana:-( Hugs Jan xx
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