Boys, Buckets, and Nets

a man and woman walking on separate paths – children scream loudly rose petals falling as flowers die on the vine – three boys pricked alone weeping willow trees shroud their twisted trunks with limbs – tree house and laughter early in the day sun shines above the frog pond – boys, buckets, and nets June 29, 2015

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Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/10/2016 9:55:00 PM

Especially love the last one! Makes me smile, remembering my little brothers and the excitement on their faces! Love it!

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 6:42:00 PM

Dane, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/21/2015 5:03:00 AM

Dane, I thank you for commenting on my poem.. Your haiku is wow!!! love the title but i certainly like more the content.. ~Olive Eloisa

James Horn

Date: 8/13/2015 7:50:00 AM

Dane Anne, Like your haiku format that I have started on PoetrySoup. But still life and the show must go one. Apparently you are doing a great job helping life continue on its way. Jim Horn

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 8/10/2015 9:49:00 PM

Dear Dane Ann, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. As Always Perfection in Haiku. I long to write such POETIC Tapestry. Superb Quill I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG -- Soup Mail Call

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 1:58:00 PM

very nostalgic set of Haiku , dear. How are you doing?

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 6/29/2015 8:18:00 AM

Sad thing about breakup and divorce and what it does to innocent kids. I enjoyed