Bottle

Behold my love, my Valentine. On my tummy let your hand recline. Tenderly touch that little bulge. Trembling fingers as I indulge. Laughter plays across your lips. Elated we embrace and kiss. 17/02/2017.

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Just James

Date: 1/25/2017 2:12:00 PM

Aaah baby buldge! You so good now you write in the future...did i mis Feb?

Just James
Date: 1/29/2017 1:36:00 AM

I was referring to the feb date at the end of the poem...but I do like fantasy!

Jean Murray
Date: 1/25/2017 2:39:00 PM

Considering I had my last baby twenty years ago James, obviously, just like Valentine's Day, the whole thing's a fantasy.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/23/2017 4:13:00 AM

I loved the secret message in this, Jean:)

Jean Murray
Date: 1/23/2017 4:25:00 AM

Thank you Jo. I wrote it for Kim's recent secret message contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/22/2017 7:33:00 PM

This is perfect Jean! ; ) 7

Jean Murray
Date: 1/23/2017 4:23:00 AM

Thank you Connie. It's one of those moments we women never forget.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/22/2017 6:58:00 PM

Finally a poem about me me me! Loved this! :)

Jean Murray
Date: 1/22/2017 7:20:00 PM

There is a little bulge my love. If only I could blame it on you.xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2017 9:42:00 PM

how cute this is, Jean. I am assuming what Victor assumes. Awesome little poem.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/22/2017 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I am thinking of changing the title now the secret is out.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2017 3:34:00 PM

Lovely, Jean! Hugs, Kim

Jean Murray
Date: 1/21/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Kim.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/18/2017 4:34:00 PM

ha! you're a clever one, jean!

Jean Murray
Date: 1/18/2017 5:18:00 PM

Not too clever I hope Ilene.