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Im stuck here
at the crossroads.
Feelings that I have
for you.

I hate you once.
I loved you once.
Can't figure out why,
I'm on the borderline.

My heart say "yes",
But my mind says "no".
I want you here,
But then I want you gone.

I'm borderline about you.
I don't know what to do.
Keep you here beside me,
or let you go in the dark?

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  1. Date: 2/4/2012 10:32:00 PM
    Reads like a love-hate relationship. I had one of them once with a former fiancee. You have decent descriptiveness with simple and easy to read wording in this work.

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 1:34:00 AM
    Nice write :-)