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Boo!

Cautiously my three walked to the porch. Two doors to choose from, spiders all around. Spooky and eerie lit by an old dungeon torch. Skeletons were hanging, eyeballs looking down. Huddled together, six eyes on old “Frank” Frightened to death worse than walking a plank. They bravely approached; Frankenstein encroached. The oldest reached up to give the doorbell a ring. In the next moment came the blood-curdling scream! Frank on the bench moved his arm in the air. The children weren’t sure that they wanted to be there. Just as he did it, s-q-u-e-a-k opened the door. The laughter inside still, in my heart does soar. A fine man came out with his camera in hand. Beside him his wife did assuringly stand. Laughter broke out when my children saw whom Had given them fright on that Halloween night. My dear friends had planned it for families and friends. Year’s worth of his photos to memories, he sends. Boo! © November 5, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 11/20/2010 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
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Date: 11/20/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, dear friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2010 1:11:00 PM
Someone went to lots of trouble to insure a lasting memory of one Halloween. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:50:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in Paula's contest with this exceptional entry ..my friend.. a perfect piece to express the theme... Happy Thanksgiving to u ... and yours.. with luv..
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:47:00 AM
Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Dane Ann. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:05:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, quite cool and nice on Boo, dane
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:42:00 AM
:) I love the way this man played a trick on the trick-or-treaters, dear friend. I have tried to turn the tables a few times myself! Picture me with green skin, warts and dark shadows around me eyes. I actually had some kids run away screaming...but they came back when they realized it was a ruse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:34:00 AM
Cute and cool poetry today Dane Ann.. enjoyed your lines so well told my friend.. happy weekend..
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