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Bonfire Night

When we were young on bonfire night, Watching fireworks light the sky And marvelled at that coloured light, When we were young on bonfire night. Enthralled by that explosive sight As sky rockets burst on high, When we were young on bonfire night, Watching fireworks light the sky. Barry Stebbings 22/06/2016

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2016 4:56:00 PM

Things viewed through a child's eyes is completely different than when we are adults isn't it..I like the smoothly flowing Triolet..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/23/2016 8:16:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Sarah. Barry

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/22/2016 7:39:00 PM

Sounds nice Barry, like our July 4th Independence Day Celebration!:)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/23/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Cheryl. Probably very similar.