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Bmw Salesman

Shiny suited man growling on cell phones Selling BMWs to tidy his life Salesman pleads in begging tones... “Full Coverage” the shiny man moans “On Sale” says the customer’s wife To reveal gray and black BMW clones The salesman barks with hasty tones “Our insurance will save your life” Policemen pardon when it is known But the cost is in the Twilight Zone digging into your pocket like a knife Is the status worth your shaking bones Salesman clamors til it is known “Power brakes” to save your life. The Silver suited man already owns Your soul and all its weary moans Reeling from a large cash price BMW and sophisticated clones Weeping ulcers will soon be known 6/15/2015

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Date: 1/10/2016 11:37:00 PM
Hi Julie, Congrats on your win. Love *LOVE SKAT*
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:34:00 PM
Julie, :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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