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As summer bled softer shades of blue, and sun spread pillows for my head... the clouds tread by... Threads of white, now stirred by the sure breath of wind, will soon shred into blue
______________________________ 6/30/15 "Waltzing With Color" Sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Date: 7/22/2015 11:57:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:29:00 PM
The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats
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Date: 7/20/2015 3:36:00 PM
shred into blue. TOO COOL, Carrie and big Congrats on your win with this creative entry.
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Date: 7/19/2015 3:23:00 PM
CARRIE, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:11:00 AM
such beautiful imagery many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2015 11:35:00 PM
Love your poem Carrie congrats !
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Date: 7/18/2015 11:08:00 PM
Carrie, beautiful imagery and I especially like the part about the clouds being pillows! Great flow to your words! Congrats on your 3rd place win and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/1/2015 1:47:00 AM
This is perfect Carrie, nothing better than a shade of blue, nice and refreshing... LINDA
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:30:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful Carrie! Gl in contest!
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:19:00 PM
This is really lovely!! All the best for the contest!! :D :D
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