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Blue Skies - and How My Poems Sometimes Evolve

I contemplate the deep blue sky While lying in the sun baked grass And wonder what it is about the summer That makes me such a lazy ... Let's start over ... While lying here in the sun baked grass I contemplate the deep blue sky And wonder what it is about the summer That makes me such a lazy guy Better! Where once were clouds in skies of gray With rain and snow falling out of it Bringing on fits of depression And really making me feel like ... Umm, scratch that... Where once rain and snow did fall From clouds in skies of gray Bringing on fits of depression And completely ruining my day Okay, that will work. Now resides the deepest blue A gift to bring me luck ... Maybe I better stop right there! Now resides a sign of luck A gift of the deepest blue Made even better today Cause I lay here next to you For Francine's "Blue on Blue on Blue" Contest Blue Skies Written and posted on 6-28-2011

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Date: 7/5/2011 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joe in Francine's "Blue on blue on blue" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:35:00 AM
unique for real and entertaining Joe. A poem in progress and a winner to boot! Congrats to you !
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:40:00 AM
First place and first-rate! Doesn't get any better than this, Joe. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:52:00 AM
I knew this was going to do well - congrats on the win - it is well deserved. MIke
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Date: 7/2/2011 5:10:00 AM
Congrats on you win. A great take on the contest, glad to see it did so well. Love the thought process!!! Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 7/2/2011 2:03:00 AM
enchanting me, joe.. KUDOS to you for superb win, huggs! :)
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Date: 7/1/2011 8:21:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your first place win in sky portion of contest with this wow wonder luv..
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Date: 7/1/2011 6:52:00 PM
I knew this was a winner when I first saw it. hmmm, I see Robert below me was thinking the same thing! well, that's two of us. Congrats on your great win.
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:40:00 PM
Very clever Joe. Congratulations on your first place.
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations Joe on your "first place" win in Francines Blue contest with this amazing poem~~
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:08:00 PM
I knew the second I read it I would not find a better entry, It's fantastic Joe, congrats on your first place win with this "sky" entry
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Date: 7/1/2011 1:49:00 PM
I really like this poem and hope it goes far in the contest. MIke
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Date: 6/29/2011 11:47:00 AM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Joe. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:49:00 PM
Very clever. Loved the first half when you were working on that one part about the sky. Funny stuff!
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:26:00 PM
True blue poetry my friend....well penned!!
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