Blue Morning

I met the day, I searched for grace to remedy a broken space somewhere within my heart; but break of day, sometimes falls gray, and silent clouds that come to pray for rain may not depart. I met the night, I searched moon’s curve to find the love I so deserve, a silhouette of you. How can I sleep alone tonight? My dreams are stolen by my fright - gray morning turns me blue…

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Anna Hopper

Date: 4/7/2015 9:18:00 AM

Wow another 7 from me!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/3/2015 10:41:00 AM

Blue is part of bright and lifting and also sad and down. This pensive write reproduces the dark side beautifully. Sad is the message radiant is the write!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/30/2015 9:22:00 PM

Beautiful, pensive write, Rhonda. Hope you are alright. Wish you a fine night. Hugs! :) KIm

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/31/2015 12:16:00 AM

Hi, Kim. I'm doing much better. Thanks...hope all is well with you, too. wishing you a good night, too :))hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2015 1:56:00 PM

This is really nice. I especially like the last two lines. What inspired this one? Are you feeling blue this day?

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/31/2015 12:14:00 AM

No, I've been feeling much better. Thanks for asking...I'm not where this one came from. I did hear the old song, Blue Morning, not long ago, but my poem is nothing like the song lyrics. I guess the title was still in my head!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2015 1:55:00 PM

thanks for informing me of the POD. I had no idea and I don't know why they chose that wolf sonnet. Not one of my best, that is for sure!! Ok, now to see your poem!!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/30/2015 12:08:00 PM

love the imaginary very beautifully painted piece rhonda

Anna Hopper

Date: 3/30/2015 7:38:00 AM

This is lovely! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this morning! Thank you for sharing!