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Blue Moon Rising

Icy winds grip the lads chilling them to the bone Had a few drinks and staggering on their way home Suddenly one lad drops his pants and reveals his naked bum Someone takes a photo - I hope no one shows his mum! NOT written for contest! Jan Allison 08-11-14

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2014 3:53:00 PM

love the surprise and playful mood, jan... enjoyed this one, lol!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2014 4:04:00 PM

Glad it made you chuckle Nette. Dare I enter it into the contest though ... I am sorely tempted LOl! Hugs Jan xxx

Country Girl48

Date: 8/12/2014 4:45:00 AM

Love it

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2014 4:56:00 AM

Thanks Melanie I hope it made you smile:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/11/2014 7:06:00 PM

That is so funny Jan, here in Oz. the guys don't even need booze to show off their bums, in fact if you look at men on building sites they usually have half their bums showing, great little write my dear, take care...........Vera.........

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 7:08:00 PM

LOL oh yes Vera we too see 'builders bums' but the mooning at night when they have been on the booze is something else LOL. Hugs Jan xxx

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/11/2014 5:50:00 PM

A whole generation putting every movement of their lives on film...just glad that wasn't around when I was young

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 5:57:00 PM

My phone makes calls and can do texts - wouldn't be able to do a 'selfie'' if I wanted to - quite a sad world we live in when every movement can be put onto social media which I abhor. Thanks for dropping by Frederic:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/11/2014 3:22:00 PM

LOL....Did you witness this Jan?......hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 3:26:00 PM

Thankfully no Tim but someone I know does it on a regular basis LOL - maybe its a British thing but i suppose the drink makes them do it. Better not enter it for contest not sure if the judge would appreciate it :-) Hugs jan xxx