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Blue Green Flames

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Blue Green Flames

Blue green flames rose from his palms
He formed them into a ball
Tossed it into outer space
In a distance it looked small

He breathed upon it's surface
Giving land and oceans form
He opened up the heavens
Creating lakes with a storm

Life sprang within the waters
Both in the lakes and the Sea
Animals walking on the land
A glimpse of eternity

Created in his image
The first human came to life
God knew he would be lonely
So for him he made a wife

Placed in a special garden
Where all of their needs are met
Still man was not satisfied
There was more for him to get

Ejected from the Garden
A flamed sword placed at the gate
Communion with their Father
Delayed till a future date




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  1. Date: 9/29/2013 5:23:00 PM
    Hahaha Great ending Rick, I love these Adam and Eve stories. Wonderful take on Genesis, those passages still fascinate me. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:58:00 AM
    Good morning....I came here waiting for a new poem....Still waiting! ;) Thanks for your comment on my poem. I have just now posted a new one. I will respond to your comment in a moment....

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/22/2013 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning, I now have one posted as well.
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 5:59:00 AM
    A fantastic poem full of hope

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/22/2013 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Monterey.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 5:20:00 PM
    Once again a great write Richard ! You have done a marvellous job..:) And yes I agree with what Eileen said..cheers !

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/22/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Red, enjoyed your poems this morning.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Richard...it's almost like you saw it all in a vision...Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful...The story of Beginnings...we have yet to experience the climactic final events after which Eden will be restored...Won't that be amazing. :) Thanks for the visits. If this is for a contest...My money is on you.... :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/21/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The inspiration came from a contest about magic. People think about magic as makebelieve so for that reason I will not enter this one into the contest.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:15:00 PM
    Aaaah, the story above all stories and so eloquently penned by you. Off to faves, Richard. Love it, love it, love it. Licia :-)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/21/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Licia!
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 11:15:00 AM
    Richard; this is beautiful - I love it, but is this the end, or is there a part II ? Lucilla

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/21/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    If the spirit moves me. Thanks for commenting.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Nice interpretation of the picture, Richard I may perhaps choose the third one.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/21/2013 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr. Ram Good luck with which ever one you choose.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 9:00:00 AM
    This takes me back to Sunday school. Well written Richard. I like the form you gave this poem.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/21/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Wayne I appreciate your visit.